娘がインターナショナルスクールの入学試験を受けましたが残念な結果に終わりました。来年再度挑戦して是非入学したいので、どのように勉強したらよいかを学校にアドバイスを求めたい。

To ABC International school,

On [January 10, 2011], my [five] year-old daughter, [Rie], went through a screening and had an interview at your school. Unfortunately, she was unsuccessful in getting a placement at your school.

We would like to apply to your school again next year.  We would appreciate it very much if you could give me some advice as to how best to prepare my daughter for the admission screening and interview.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
[your name]